我叫xx,今年（1）24
and to tell the truth, i was(2) not majoring in Computer Science,
如實說，我不是學計算機專業的。
but programming had(3) become my hobby when I was in college.
可是編程成為我的興趣當我還在大學的時候。
It also made(4) me have a sense of achievement,(5) so I decided to dedicate my life to computer and programming work.
編程還讓我覺得非常有成就感，所以我決定把畢生奉獻給計算機和編程事業
I have over 4 years of experience developing software using C on unix/linux platform.
我有超過4(5)年的unix/linux平臺的軟件開發經驗
and now, I am sure I am not only a good designer but also an(6) excellent program writer.
現在我確定我不光是壹個優秀的設計者，還是壹個優秀的程序寫手。
I am proficient at C programming on unix and linux OS, and I am also proficient at network communication programming.
我精通unix/linux下c語言編程，並且我也精通網絡通訊編程
my frequently sed(?) OS platform is Redhat enterprise server and aix 5.3 I am an(7) expert in mutil-p,mutil-th,ipc, dll,and socket programming.
and I also have knowlegde about some LKM programming.
我經常使用的平臺是redhat企業服務器和aix，我是壹個多進程，多線程，dll,ipc,socket方面的老手， 並且我也有壹些LKM方面的知識
I am proud of a project which is from the start to the end on (8)schedules step by step. and I've experienced(9) that during my last job(10).
employment,
我為那種從計劃開始到壹步壹步完成的項目感到自豪，並且在上個公司有過這樣的經歷
We designed the XXX system and developed it, and (11) passed the Pressure Testing successfully. It(12) was indeed an(13) exciting experience. I was in(14) charge of background server design and most of the(15) coding work.
我設計開發了xx系統，並且成功通過壓力測試， 那真是壹個驚動人心的經歷阿，我在那個項目裏負責後臺服務器設計和大部分編碼工作
After(16) that project, for(17) some private reasons(18), I quit that job.
在哪個項目之後因為壹些私人原因，我離開了公司
Now(19), I would like to become a member of you and i'd like to prove I(20) have the qualification.
現在，我希望能假如妳們並且我想證明我有這個能力資格
That's(21) all，and(22) thank you.(23)
以上，謝謝