Good afternoon (morning), professors：
It is my great pleasure to be here. My name is liu Chunjing,graduated from Huaibei Coal Industry Teachers'college of mathematic and application of mathematic.
During my four-year study in the university, I have built up a solid foundation of professional knowledge, as well as a rich experience of social activeties. I am a determined person,always willing to achieve higher goals. What's more, I am good at analysis, with a strong sense of cooperation.
In my spare time,, I am very humorous and easy-going, enjoying a good relationship among my classmates. I like to read books regarding how to be myself and how to deal with problems. Music and reading are my favorite entertainments.
All in all, your Universit , with a highly qualified faculty and strong academic environment is the university I have long admired. I believe that I am a very qualified applicant for admission into your Master of Administration program and can contribute to the enrichment or diversity of your university.
THANK YOU FOR YOUR ATTENTION！
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Jules Verne was born in the west of French,1828.His father was a very successful lawyer,but Verne loved the sea and wanted to went all over the world.When he was 18 years old,his father made him learnt law.He was not interested in it but was very interested in literature and drama.Then he published the book 'five weeks on the balloons'.It was a great success.Since then,he wrote 'twenty thousand leagues under the sea'、'travel around the world in 80days' and so on.He was died on 3.24,1905.
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My Favourite Sport
My favourite sport is basketball as it is very exciting. I like basketball because the N.B.A. stars play very well. Basketball is very cheap and it is a good sport for our health. We can grow taller if we play basketball often. Also it keeps me fit.
I play basketball three times a week. Most often I play it in my school. I often play it with my friends although I may play it myself. I feel very happy when I play basketball in school with my classmates. Sometimes I play basketball in the playground near my home.
Basketball is very easy to play. If you play basketball very well, you can form a basketball team to take part in the competition. If you win the basketball competition, you will have the prize. You may become a famous basketball star.
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My Hometown
Welcome to my hometown! Haimen is my hometown. It is a modern and busy town. It has a long history. There are many big supermarkets, beautiful gardens and good factories here. It is very easy to go shopping. You can see green hills, big trees and nice flowers. There are many restaurants in Haimen. You can enjoy Haimen goat. It tastes very delicious. Many visitors come here to enjoy it.
There are many good places to visit. There is a park and a big Shopping Mall. You can see films in Renmin Theatre. My school is one of the best schools in my hometown. It is on Changjiang Road. It is very beautiful. I hope you can come and visit soon.
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My teacher Mr.Moore
Of all my teachers,Mr.Moore is the one who impresses me most.Though he is 34,he looks very young for his age.Andhe’s one of the most popular teachers in our school.
Compared with other teachers,Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of teachering.He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting.In his opinion,we should not only know "what",but also understand"why". So,instead of giving us answers immediately,he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions.With his help,we’ve learned how to analyze and settle problems.What a wonderfui world of "why" he leads us to！
He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.
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本文內容要點齊全，人稱和時態把握得較好。文章的層次感強，語言生動，較好地抓住了英文詩的特點，挖掘出了豐滿的人物特征。運用了壹些較高級詞匯和較復雜語法結構，如：impress sb. most;compare with;encourage sb.to do sth.;whenever;a learned person等，提高了文章的得分檔次。本文貼近現實生活，真實感強，是壹篇不錯的習作。
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'Education is what survives when what has been learned has been forgotten.' B. F. Skinner exclaimed in ‘New Scientist’on 21 May 1964.
Is education the set of knowledge to be passed on to the youths at school? Is education masses of exercises that await students to finish? Is education teachers dweltering in class with attention to students' notetaking? Definitely not, according to Skinner. Education concerns itself with the abstract ability and personality. Education inspires, enlightens, informs and instructs one. Education helps foster better personalities for future wellbeing of individuals as well as of a nation. Individuals pay to get quality education. Educators are expected to serve that purpose.
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Now, there is a world suffering. Many people live hard. Some countries are lack of funds. Financial crisis influences people's lives. Many children can't go to school. They are sad. But they have no good idea. They are poor.They have no enough money to go to school. They desire to go to school. They feei helpess.
Some families are not rich any more, some factories close down. Many entrepreneurs and corporation's bosses and staffs are very sad. Because they lose their work. They feel very painful.
Everyone is worried about the fainanoial crisis. People want fine lives. Children desire to go to school. Staffs desire to work. We should get together to come over the difficulties。 We have confidence in ourselves. Let‘s bless everything can become better
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我看師生關系(My Idea on Teacher student Relationship)
1．師生關系的重要性；
2．如何保持良好的師生關系。
[寫作導航]先從正反兩方面說明師生關系在學校生活中的重要性：良好的關系可使學習有趣，教學開心；反之，學習無聊，教學沒趣；而要想師生關系良好，相互理解和尊重很重要；老師既不能太嚴和太松；學生則應理解老師的苦衷，並虛心向老師學習；總之，良好的師生關系會使學生、老師雙雙受益。
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Teacher student relationship plays an important role in school life. A good relationship will make learning interesting and teaching enjoyable. A bad relationship, however, can make learning dull and teaching unpleasant.
To have a good teacher student relationship, it is important that the teacher and the student understand each other and respect each other. The teacher must know that he should be neither too tough, nor too permissive. If he is too tough, the student may be frightened and discouraged. If he is too permissive, the student may become lazy and careless. So his attitude should be between the two extremes. He should be strict yet friendly. As for a student, he should know that what the teacher does is for the benefit of his students. He should always show his proper respect to the teacher. Moreover, he should always be eager to learn and willing to work hard. If he is modest, he will learn more than just knowledge from his teacher.
In one word, a good teacher student relationship can be mutually beneficial. The student may find the learning process both fruitful and enjoyable while the teacher may find his teaching satisfactory and pleasant.
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