1. 前段時間校園火災頻發，造成生命和財產損失
2. 分析火災發生的原因
3. 作為學生，如何預防校園火災發生
●審題概述●r
這是壹分析火災原因和如何預防火災為中心的文章，撰寫時重點即在於此。開篇綜述校園火災頻發情形及造成的生命和財產損失，然後說明火災原因，最後提出可能的火災預防措施。第壹段，主要概述；第二段，說明原因；第三段，詳細論述措施。
範文
Fire Prevention on Campus
People are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents, heavy casualties were reported – houses were burned down, students lost their lives, and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking, “What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?”
A brief survey of them reveals that human factors still prove to be the leading causes. For example, three of these fires were caused by the students’ use of electric water-heaters. As students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are rather high should the water in the bottle boil dry while no one is around to turn off the power. In other cases, fires were also caused by stoves, candles, cigarette butts, etc.
Since most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken, students should be better educated on the importance and measures of fire control. The following three reminders are of particular importance for us students: First, learn how to use a fire extinguisher. Second, double-check candles, heaters, stoves and other electric appliances, and make sure there are no open flames before leaving rooms. Lastly, do not smoke in the dorm.
◇第壹段思路點評：
概述並引入下文
◇語言點提示：
（1）此句What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?常可作為過渡句，引出下文
（2）註意描述有關火災客觀事實，多使用被動語態，如are alarmed by，were reported，were burned down，were damaged，Faced with。
◇第二段思路點評：
論述火災的主要原因是使用電熱水器，還有造成火災的次要原因是實用電爐、蠟燭和亂扔煙蒂，
◇語言點提示：
electric water-heaters電熱水器
◇第三段思路點評：
詳述預防火災的三點措施，註意使用連接詞語first, second, lastly。
◇語言點提示：
take precautions采取預防措施
fire extinguisher滅火器
（二）Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
1. 校園盜竊案件時有發生
2. 物品被盜的原因
3. 學生如何加強防盜意識
●審題概述●
這是壹篇論述校園物品被盜和加強防盜意識的文章。第壹段，主要陳述校園盜竊案件發生的情況。第二段，主要分析校園物品被盜的原因。第三段，主要闡述學生怎樣增強防盜意識。範文
Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
“If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.
What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.
In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.
◇第壹段思路點評：
陳述校園盜竊案件發生的情況
◇語言點提示：
it seems that此句型表示壹種可能性
◇第二段思路點評：
說明被盜原因
◇語言點提示：
（1）What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文
（2）anti-theft alertness防盜意識
（3）lack of alertness缺乏警惕
（4）light-fingered小偷小摸的、慣行扒竊的
◇第三段思路點評：
闡述如何加強防盜意識
◇語言點提示：
註意關聯詞語in the first place，Besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富邏輯性。
（三）How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
1. 網絡提供給了人們豐富多彩和便捷的生活
2. 很多人開始感覺離開網絡寸步難行
3. 妳對網絡依賴癥的看法
● 審題概述●
本文是壹篇論述妳對網絡與人們生活關系的文章。第壹段，側重簡述網絡給人們生活的多彩、便利。第二段，詳述網絡與人們生活的緊密度。第三段，論述對網絡依賴的觀點。
範文1：
How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.
Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.
True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.
◇第壹段思路點評：
綜述網絡給人們生活帶來的多彩和便捷。兩個長句足矣。第壹句用if引導的條件句引出“網絡”話題，第二句概述網絡帶給多彩和便捷的生活。
◇語言點提示：
has drawn…, realized, and provided此為謂語連動式的運用。
◇第二段思路點評：
詳述網絡與人們生活的緊密關系，先總述，後分述。
◇語言點提示：
resort to借助、訴諸、求助於
◇第三段思路點評：
先陳述人們對網絡的依賴，再談對此的看法。
◇語言點提示：
（1）negative effects副作用、反面作用
（2）addicts成癮者、依戀者
（3）fantasy world虛擬世界、虛幻世界
（4）pornography色情表演、色情作品
（5）fraud欺騙、詐騙
範文2：
As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.
For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much so that they forget many other important matters.
As for me, I don’t approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: “Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.”
（四）Craze for Civil Service Examinations
1. 現在有越來越多的大學畢業生報考公務員
2. 引起此現象的原因
3. 妳的看法
● 審題概述●r
本文是壹篇主要論述大學生報考公務員增多的原因和對此看法的文章。第壹段，主要綜述大學生報考公務員增多的現象。第二段，側重分析引起此現象的原因。第三段，重點談妳對此的觀點。
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Craze for Civil Service Examinations
Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.
In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors – ambitions and comforts. On the one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as well as other comforts of life, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.
Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.
◇第壹段思路點評：
第壹句總述人們蜂擁參加公務員招考，第二句點明大學生是其中的主力軍，第三句再述熱衷於公務員報考的大學生不僅有文科的，還有理工科的。
◇語言點提示：
liberal arts majors文科專業學生
◇第二段思路點評：
先總述引起大學生熱衷報考公務員的兩點因素，再詳細分述。
◇語言點提示：
（1）On the one hand…On the other起到銜接上文作用
（2）is attributable to歸因於
（3）sluggish world economy衰退的世界經濟
◇第三段思路點評：
重點談對大學生熱衷報考公務員的觀點。
◇語言點提示：
beyond reproach無可厚非
（六）University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands
1. 現在很多大學生都追求穿名牌，用名牌
2. 妳對這種現象的看法
● 審題概述●r
這是壹篇論述對大學生追求和使用名牌看法的文章。第壹段，詳述大學生熱衷追求、使
用名牌的情形以及人們的看法。第二段，重點談妳對此的看法。
範文
University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands
“What perfumes are you wearing?” “Aren’t your shoes Nike’s latest release?” “I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday.” “I hear the Jack & Jones store is on sale this week. Do you wanna come along?” Don’t feel surprised if you hear them coming out of the mouth of college students. It’s quite common to hear and see college students swapping information about the brands they like and the products they use. In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the college students’ favourite pastimes. They learn about the latest fashion from each other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest convenience. “Keeping up with the Joneses” is their conviction – “If the Joneses have it, how could I have not?”
About this current mindset of the college students, many people may hasten to show their disapproval. They’ll probably take it to be a reflection of the students’ vanity and superficiality. And they may lecture them on the virtue of being thrifty.
However, I beg to differ. For one thing, name-brand products are usually quality products. As such, they are something beautiful, endurable, and reliable. “The love of beauty is common to all,” goes the proverb; therefore, there’s nothing to blame about the pursuit of famous brands. For the other, college students are old enough to make their own decisions. Likewise, they must abide by the consequences if they make an ill-advised one. If they let their pursuit of brands eat into their budget for other more important issues, they should be able to correct their mistakes and keep everything in moderation. So this becomes no other than a good chance to learn management, isn’t it?
◇第壹段思路點評：
本段分為兩個部分，即詳細陳述大學生追求和使用名牌的情況，以及人們對此的看法。
◇語言點提示：
（1）keeping up with the Joneses要在地位和物質上比得上周圍的人
（2）conviction堅定的信仰、看法
（3）vanity and superficiality虛榮心和面子觀（膚淺、表面、淺薄）
◇第二段思路點評：
本段應辯證地分析大學生追求、使用名牌的現象，既有對此肯定的看法，也有否定的看法，即大學生在追求和使用名牌中汲取經驗教訓並學會管理。
◇語言點提示：
（1）abide by the consequences自食其果
（2）ill-advised考慮不周的、不明智的
（3）in moderation適度、不過分
（七）Knowledge and Diploma
1. 目前社會上存在這樣壹種說法：文憑越高越吃香
2. 而有些人則認為文憑不等於知識
3. 妳的觀點
● 審題概述●r
這是壹篇論述高文憑與知識關系的文章。第壹段，概述社會上文憑越高越吃香的看法。第二段，主要論述有些人文憑不等於知識的觀點。第三段，重點闡述妳對此的看法。
範文
Knowledge and Diploma
It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social reality – the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he becomes.
On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’s educational experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people don’t have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world’s most learned men.
So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs one’s lifelong devotion.
◇第壹段思路點評：
先陳述人們對高文憑高能力的看法，再點出這是壹種社會現實。
◇語言點提示：
job candidate求職者、應聘者
◇第二段思路點評：
詳細論述文憑並不等於能力。
◇語言點提示：
Acknowledgment承認、致謝、感謝、答謝
◇第三段思路點評：
使用壹個長句闡述了妳對文憑與知識辯證關系的認識。
◇語言點提示：
（1）equate a diploma with knowledge 把文憑與知識劃等號
（2）nothing but a proof of a short-term study只是短期學習的證明