I'm very glad to be the first duty reporter today.
* (妳原來那樣翻譯太直了,沒勁)
First, let me introduce myself.
* (Let's是表示"讓我們...,即let us...".所以讓我來介紹壹下自己, 不能說let's me...,而是let me...)
I like watching cartoon
*(anime沒有動畫片/動漫的意思,animation才是,anime是樹脂的意思啊)
such as Bleach ，Naruto,One Prince CONAN, and so on.
(Naruto這個詞的發音應該為[nei'rutou]),Prince不就是prince嗎?音標應為[prins]）.另外,當妳提到壹些專有名詞時,建議首寫字母大寫.)
Reading inriches mind.
*(有時我們也會說We inrich ourselves by reading)
I also like reading.
*( 這裏用also要比too 更合適; 另外, "看書"我們不說reading books,直接用reading即可.)
such as Twilight, Harrypotter, The adventure of Tom Sawyer,and so on.
(這句基本沒什麽問題,只是忘記了標標點啦, 標上即可.另外記得, 英語中的句號不是“。”而是 ".")
I'm so happy that many of my old friends has come to this class with me. Of course, I'm glad to make more new friends.
Garfield says, Never put off what you can eat today till tomorrow.
I say, never put off what you can do today till tomorrow.
Don't dream away your days.
*(這裏我認為用days來代替time更形象壹些,仍然表示時光,但感覺上比time更強調每天的時光.)
Great hopes make great man. Hopefully,everyone of us can find our own dreams and can stick it to the end. No matter what difficulties you meet, don't say Die. Don't abase yourself. If you work hard, every thing is possible.
Now, at the coming of Teachers' Day, i would like to send my best wishes to all of my teachers--May You All be Happy!